Writing On The Walls Bass

I cleaned the song up and it sounds good now any comments or criticism is allowed so,
give it. Only part unsure about is Bridge II.
 
Symbols
x | Mute Note
* | Let Ring (I use this bcuz its more distinct and easier 2 see)
\ | Slide Down
 
Post-Intro | I SWEAR WE NEED TO FIND SOME COMFORT!!
G|---------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|---------------------------------------------------------------------|
A|---------------------------------------------------------------------| x2
D|-3333333333333333-1111111111111111-3333333333333333-5555555555555555-|
 
Verse I | How come you try to......
G|-------------------------|
D|-------------------------|
A|-------------------------| x2
D|1-0-3**-------3-0-1**----|
 
Bridge I | AT THIS RATE, WE CANT KEEP UUPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!
G|-------------------------------------------------|
D|-------------------------------------------------|
A|---------------------------------0x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x| x2
D|0x---0x--------------0x-------0x-----------------|
 
Verse II | We Walk Alone!!
G|-----|
D|-----|
A|-----| x7
D|111x-|
 
Bridge II | You're Almost Gone And I'm Okay
G|------------------------| End Bridge II G|-------------|
D|------------------------| With This x1  D|-------------|
A|------------------------|               A|-------------|
D|1-0-1*--3-0-3*--5-0-5*--|x6             D|5*********---|
OR This IS
D|111*--333*---555*-------| x6
 
Outro | I KNOW THERE MUST BE SOME WAY OUT OF HERE!!!....
G|-----|           G|----------------|
D|-----|           D|----------------|
A|-----| x7        A|----------------|End with this x1
D|000x-|           D|0-2\0-0******---|
 
Send Me all your lovely comments this WAS my first tab and i screwed it up, so here it
again, :)
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